iMedia: Oxford Comma

       

        I chose the song Oxford Comma by Vampire Weekend. Vampire Weekend is one of my favorite bands. Their style is kind of an intellectual indie/alternative. I recently went to a one of their concerts in Chicago and this song was one of the many they performed. I really like the way the song is written and the music. They are truly talented musicians. But the thing I am really writting about is the words to this song and its cultural implications.
        The members of Vampire Weekend are Columbia University graduates. They are from well-off East Coast families, but many of their songs are about the problems of high society and how snobby and prejudice they can be. They use parody in Oxford Comma to make fun of how people these days (especially high class) make a big deal out of the littlest things. The line from the chorus, "Who give a f*** about an Oxford Comma?" is talking about the arguement over whether or not an oxford comma is neccessary in sentences. The bands opinion is, "why is that something worth fighting over?" The song is actually about oxford commas, but that stands more as an example of the kinds of little things that are blown out of proportion and it questions why people feel the need to lie about and aruge over small things. Maybe to make themselves appear smarter or more powerful.
Why would you lie about how much coal you have?
Why would you lie about something dumb like that?
Why would you lie about anything at all?
First the window, then it's to the wall
Lil' Jon, he always tells the truth
        I like this song and chose to share it because I agree with their lyrics and what they are saying about society. I think there would be far less problems in the world if people cared less about being right and argued less about pointless things.
         
   

Best of Week: Born Into Brothels

        Two days this past week we watched the documentary Born Into Brothels, which is about children who were born and raised in the red light district of Calcutta, India. It was terrible to see the conditions that these children have to grow up in. As it is, its not a good life for their mothers, who put food on the table by working as prostitutes. Although it is sad and almost hard to watch, I'm glad I did because it was an eye opener for me. Seeing the kind of hardship and poverty others go through in the world always makes me feel lucky and want to do something to help.
        This is the reason for my going on the Habitat for Humanity trip originally. I saw what Hurricane Katrina hada done to the gulf coast and new five years later they were still rebuilding and still needed help. I saw it as an oppurtunity to use what I have (in this case time and the ability to build houses) to help someone who doesn't have anything.
        I think it would be cool if as a class we looked into the subject of the documentary in greater detail. I know we are watching it because it connects with the book, and I think it does have a strong connection in terms of the photography aspect, but I would like to research the children themselves. If not the actual children featured in the film, we should look into other children born into brothels and see if we can helo as a class. If not, I will certainly do somemore research and see what I can do to help.
        It's terribly sad, but I'm glad the filmaker noticed them. I think the cameras and the photography classes were a good idea because it gives them something to keep them of the street and hopefully enough money to support them or get them through school. I'm looking forward to watching the end of the movie this coming week.

Metacognition: QE Essay

        When I started writing my QE essay, the first thing I had to decide was which question from the list I wanted to address. I chose the question "how can creativity be used to improve the human condition?" I chose it because it seemed like the easiest question for me to answer because I knew I had an opinion on it.
       My initial thought was "of course it can because creativity is the start of everything, so to improve the human condition, creavity is needed." However, this was too simple of a thought and I began to worry if this essay idea would hold up and if I could write a thesis off it. I began working on section II not knowing if my essay would work out or not.
        I was alsos nervous about section II because it was about exploring the question instead of proving it. However, after exploring, I truly found an answer. I realized people have good ideas about how to make the world a better place all the time, but the key is to act on them, to innovate. I discovered this answer by exploring my five sources and seeing other examples of innovation that improved society.
        This was honestly one of the hardest essays I've ever had to write. It's not because it wasn't a five paragraph, structured essay. I've written unstructured papers before. I've also written longer essays than the QE, but I'd never written a paper that spent more than half the paper exploring and thinking, rather than just expressing a thesis and proving it. In the end, I was happy with the answer I came to and how the essay turned out.

Blogging Around

Lizzie- Best of Week: The College Essay

Lizzie wrote her best of week blog on the class we spent talking about a good college essay. I liked it because I am going through a lot of the same things she is and could really relate to what she had to say.

I completely agree with you Lizzy. This was a well written blog and I am definitely feeling your pain. I think we talked about this on Habitat, but I want to go to Madison too. But I don't know if I'll have the grades. I got a lot going on in my life and I'm kind of scared I'm developing senioritis. However, the talk in class did help a lot. I was worried that the colleges I apply to will not like my essay, but it felt good to hear from a teacher that we should just be ourselves. This past weekend, I was able to pump out my first (and hopefully only essay). I think it went well and I used my own voice. Keep up the good blogging and good luck getting accepted.

Melissa- Carry It Forward: IDEO Video

Melissa wrote her carry it forward blog on the IDEO video. I liked it because it was well written and had a lot of good ideas that I had never thought of and I agreed with. It was also interesting that we both wrote about IDEO but had different things that we carried forward from it.

I enjoyed reading your blog Melissa. It was well written and flowed very well. I wrote my Carry It Forward blog on IDEO too. I like that we both were able to write the same assignment on the same subject and neither one of us really touched on the same ideas. I wrote mine about creativity and innovation. I like your ideas and I agree. Sometimes thinking about someone else helps you make better decisions and it is probably more useful to both you and them. The part where you wrote about filling out forms neatly I can totally relate to. It reminded me of me college apps. All in all it was a very interesting blog. Good job.